The surreal clips worked well in critique. One clip will be excluded because it liquid stream was reminiscent of urination. The rest of the clips were fine. The Realistic portion is edited, though I was advised by two different critique groups to reshoot in a new location. I will be exploring new set options on Monday. The best suggestion I received was to ask to use the Health Services building during off hours. Ideally I would find a real therapist’s office. It was pointed out to me that this last edit of the project works as a kind of storyboard. I have the clips and lines mapped out through that attempt, so I need only focus on those shots and some extra. Ultimately, filming will go faster on the second attempt. Here are some clips of the footage I will not be using.
